Silly Sea Otter

Original poem

There once was a silly sea otter

Who was the otters' mayor's daughter

She swam up the river

Cut through like a sliver

Look at how she loves the water!

This poem is a limerick about a sea otter. In line one, there is alliteration and consonance in "There once was a silly sea otter." There is a simile in line four with "Cut through like a sliver." It is comparing the otter's quick swimming to how quick a sliver can cut through something.

The Sound of a Storm

Original poem

The rain is so loud

It's pounding on the rooftop

A crack of thunder

The wind howls so loudly

There's no way to fall asleep

This poem is a tanka about the sounds you hear during a big storm. In line two, there is a personification used with "It's pounding on the rooftop." The rain is not literally pounding on the rooftop, it is so loud that it sounds like it is. On line three, there is an onomatopoeia with "A crack of thunder." There is another personification on line four, with "the wind howls so loudly." The wind isn't literally howling, it just sounds like it is.

Lucid Dream

Original poem

 It's funny how in a dream you can feel

As if you're really there

Almost like these senses are real

That there's sun on your face, wind in your hair

What if you could control your life

As if in a lucid dream

Create your own world free of sadness or strife

A perfect world is what it would seem

Up to the heavens, you could fly

No rules, you could just run free 

The laws of physics, you could defy

Possibility as big as the sea

You could create your very own story

An adventure for you, filled with wonder and glory

This poem is an English sonnet. It is about what life would be like if it were like a dream you could control. There is alliteration lines seven and eight, with "sadness or strife" and "world is what it would seem." Line nine has an allusion, with "Up to the heavens." Line twelve has a simile, with "Possibility as big ad the sea." It is comparing the vast amount of dreams a person can dream with the size of the ocean.

The Fab Four

Original Poem

Four Liverpudlian lads

 Back then were the most famous fads

They wrote music with rhyme

That've stood the test of time

And people still think that they're rad

This poem is a limerick. It is about The Beatles and how they have managed to stay famous and liked for a very long time. There is an alliteration is line one, with "Liverpudlian lads." There is also alliteration in line two, with "famous fads." In line four, "That've stood the test of time" is a metaphor because there is not a legitimate test, it means their songs have not been ruined since that much time has passed. In line five, there is alliteration with "think that they're" and assonance with "And people still think that they're rad."

A Rose

Original poem

A rose, round and red

Sparkles with droplets of rain

A beautiful thing

This poem is a haiku. It is about the beauty of a rose after a rain shower. Alliteration is used in line one with "rose, round and red." Imagery is used in line one and two with "round and red" and "sparkles with droplets of rain."

Our Mother Earth

By Shweta Banerjee

As I walk across the earth,

thousands of things I get to see.

Birds fly high, soaring higher,

and on the flowers I hear the buzz of bees.

The sun at the dawn, rises within the hills.

Mountains covered with snow,

shining like the crown of silver. 

And the waves touching the cliffs.

The waterfall flowing down

the green-blue mountains.

Rivers forming a dream delta 

before entering the sea.

And while walking on the beach at night,

I feel the cool and sweet smelling breeze.

The slashing sound still feels like

the sound of love and peace.

The moon over the sea,

shining like a ball of gold.

And in every step my eyes hold wonder.

I bend on my knee

to thank the mother earth,

And is the truth.

it's a great pleasure for me,

to live in this wonderland.

Analysis:

This poem is about the beauty of nature on Earth. The theme is to appreciate the beautiful planet we live on. 

This poem is made up of one quatrain, one octet and one twelve line stanza. There is no definite rhyme scheme.

Poetic Devices:

Line 4: Onomatopoeia - "I hear the buzz of bees" 

Line 15: Alliteration - "The slashing sound still feels like"

A Ghost in the Night

By Nan Nicholas I heard you in a dream last night. You spoke to me so clearly. Your voice seemed friendly, soft and sweet. It was grand to feel you near me.

But when I wake, of course, you're gone.
And I know you won't be back.
So far away and unreachable,
you're the dearest thing I lack.

I wish you didn't hate me so.
I'll always yearn for you.
Guess we must have crossed in another life,
but I'm the only one who knew.

The first time that I saw you,
you cocked your head and smiled.
But that was many, many years ago,
and beyond far too many miles.

We had the same eyes, green and old,
though our youth belied the years.
Age-old thoughts we must have shared,
and many, many tears.

My heart was yours from that very day.
You held it in your hand.
And I held yours for just a while
in our Never, Never Land.

But we were not to be, you and I.
You belonged to someone else.
So we laughed and loved and said goodbye.
I put my heart back on the shelf.

Twenty years went by, some slow, some fast,
and there you were again.
Not in the flesh but in my dream,
sitting quietly, at the foot of my bed.

"Get up," you said, "and come with me.
You can't let go just yet.
I'll wait for you, but not too long;
we must make the most of what's left."

It seemed so real. Your coat was red,
your voice was clear and strong.
Your words sang softly within my head.
Maybe all hope was not yet gone.

So I rose, somehow, I found the strength
to get up one more time.
Though when I did, you soon were gone.
Am I finally losing my mind?

"To the sea," I said, "to my wishing spot.
That's where I need to go.
To ask my sun god what to do
for an aching heart. He'll know."

"Go find him," I heard, though not in words.
The waves brought the message to me.
And with each splash, the dark and cold
gave a hint of what still might be.

"Good God," I thought, "what might I find?
Will he hate me or even remember?
I must take the chance, whatever the cost,
I'll write to him in December."

And so I did, and before too long,
a letter from you I got.
But no words of love or "welcome back."
None of that mushy rot.

Soon the time came when my wish came true.
I saw you in the flesh.
Your dark hair now no longer brown,
but those green eyes, still sweet and fresh.

My heart for so long had been still and weak.
For years it had not sung a song.
Maybe now, at last, it might come back to life.
My fears of gloom could be wrong.

But I'm too late, I see. It's hard to swallow.
The feelings you had once are gone.
Though I still worship you, you've gotten over me.
You regained your life and went on.

My foolish heart played a trick on me,
one last prank before it dies.
"Way to go, old sport, at least I see
by no earthly rules are you tied."

So back in your box, my naive hopes.
It was only a dream brought me here.
A ghost in the night spoke my name, you see,
and for a minute I saw through my tears.

Maybe next time around, we'll get it right.
Til then I'll go back to sleep.
But an amputee still feels his legs,
and you'll always be here with me.

Analysis:

 This poem is a ballad about a person who falls in love with someone that is already with someone else. They don't see each other for twenty years, until the person sees the other person in a dream. Person A gives Person B a visit because they still have feelings for them, but Person B no longer has feelings for Person A. The theme is not to hold onto the past too much, because it might hurt you in the future.

This poem is made up of 21 quatrains, most with a rhyme scheme of ABAB.

Poetic Devices:

Line 28: Metaphor - "I put my heart back on the shelf" meaning they had to keep their feelings of love at bay.

Line 36: Alliteration - "Must make the most of what's left"

Line 47: Allusion - "To ask my sun god what to do"

Line 50: Metaphor/Personification - "The waves brought the message to me." The waves can't really "bring messages," they probably meant that they realized the message while listening to the sound of the waves.

Line 53: Allusion - "Good God"

Line 66: Personification - (referring to their heart) "For years it had not sung a song" meaning for years her heart had not felt love.

Lines 73-76: Personification - "My foolish heart played a trick on me, one last prank before it dies. 'Way to go, old sport, at least I see by no earthly rules are you tied.'" Their heart didn't literally play a trick on them, it really means that their feelings for the other person combined with the dream led them to believe the other person might still have feelings for them after all those years.
Line 77: Metaphor - "So back in your box, my naive hopes" The person is telling their feelings for the other to be push aside once again.

Line 79: Metaphor - "A ghost in the night spoke my name, you see." A ghost didn't really speak to them, it's referring to the image the person saw in their dream